jjsuperspeed's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Glurmp]

resubmiting its still utter crap now heres the reaons why 1 its too short 2 the animation is a bit lazy three there arnt even any words in the whole thing ..working on sound my ass,,,4its stupid to no end 5 it dosent even make sense 6 it could of been better 7 i just dont like it, make it longer add more scripts and perhaps a more well developed drawling

EpilepticEmus responds:

Ok, ill admit in hindsight this probably isn't newgrounds material and I probably just should have left it on youtube. However, youtube is useless for decent feed back on animations so thats why I posted it here. Also, when I meant sounds I meant sound effects, I am new to animating and have never really worked with sound effects before( and btw he doesn't talk because he is a blob, I decided this when designing the character). I can't change if you dont like it, or think it's stupid, but i just wanted to clarify some things so you can see it for what it is. I'm not going for a Oscar here, Im just testing my skills. And thank you for the review, even if its more negative than constructive it still helps.

[Smash Bros Afterhours]

yeah this stuff sucks what more can i seay? i mean the music was cool grapics decent but elsware blah..

LordoftheJimmy responds:

To each his own...

[The World Ending]

your loader is stupid cant take points off for that and you have one wich is really good for me loved the voice acting but other then that it got dull fast and yeah it made no sense to me ....

AtroxChobatsu responds:

Yeah, the loader really has nothing to do with the actual cartoon; the Tournament theme this year was about a zombie apocalypse, but there's nothing like that in the short itself. We all got pre-loaders like this.

Sorry for the confusion.

[Return of the Goldblum]

shit..... no really shit............ i havent a clue of how to make that any better other then making the voice acting better and .......... having an actual story line!

NintendoClock responds:

there was a story line, its called jeff goldblum.

[The Fight]

hmm interesting kinda a try hard the sound and grahpic could be better also a but stupid but i love stupid unfortually i count tell what they are saying also its too short longer please?

yarvenclog responds:

I would have liked to make it longer, but again, I only had about 3 weeks to do this so I had to cut out a lot of my original idea